Would You Like You, If You met You?

You look tired,

Your hair is out of place,

There’s sadness in your eyes,

And dullness on your face.

Tell me,

Would you like you if you met you,

If that was the case?

You’ve isolated yourself,

There’s no one you could call,

No one would lend a hand,

If the next moment you fall.

Tell me,

Would you like you if you met you,

Just passing by the mall?

You’ve dreams,

Not a will to make them true.

You wish to fly,

But scared to try anything new.

Tell me,

Would you like you if you met you,

It that was something you were asked to do?

You’ve lost hope,

You don’t believe in god anymore,

Every turn in your life,

Those moments, the drive,

Now make you bore.

Tell me,

Would you like you if you met you,

Just ask your heart’s core?

You don’t love you,

You don’t believe.

You don’t trust you,

You don’t achieve.

Tell me,

Would you like you if you met you,

If this is the way you are going to live?

 

 

 

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47 thoughts on “Would You Like You, If You met You?

    • I’ve asked the same question to so many people here in wordpress. Its a great world, we find so many people feeling the same way as we do. But sad to know you are feeling this way. *hugs*

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      • *hugs* If this is the way you feel, I would really suggest you to go through my recent post, that is SO US. 🙂

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      • No worries. Days are meant to work and nights are meant to enjoy but wait, when do we sleep? Say Hi to Insomnia B) xD

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  1. brilliancee!!! something that I always believe in and always keep reminding to myself!
    Make urself interesting, Be how you want others to be! If you dont find urself interesting then nobody probably will.
    keep writing! 🙂

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  2. this is amazing… i remb a serial statement in marathi.. jar tu mulga aslas tar tu tujhya sarkhi mulgi shi prem kela astas ka ? if u were a boy would u love a gal like you…
    awesome lines gal u have written 🙂

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  3. Hey ! Just came across your poem on Arindam’s blog…..I must say this is real beautiful ! And after reading it collectively with the Arindam’s part It feels much more beautiful 🙂 “Would you like you if you met you” This line is a master piece ! Very Beautiful !

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