You look tired,
Your hair is out of place,
There’s sadness in your eyes,
And dullness on your face.
Tell me,
Would you like you if you met you,
If that was the case?
You’ve isolated yourself,
There’s no one you could call,
No one would lend a hand,
If the next moment you fall.
Tell me,
Would you like you if you met you,
Just passing by the mall?
You’ve dreams,
Not a will to make them true.
You wish to fly,
But scared to try anything new.
Tell me,
Would you like you if you met you,
It that was something you were asked to do?
You’ve lost hope,
You don’t believe in god anymore,
Every turn in your life,
Those moments, the drive,
Now make you bore.
Tell me,
Would you like you if you met you,
Just ask your heart’s core?
You don’t love you,
You don’t believe.
You don’t trust you,
You don’t achieve.
Tell me,
Would you like you if you met you,
If this is the way you are going to live?
A winner of a poem!
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thank you.. 🙂
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Interesting !
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Some question are answered by living and chance. Take no chances. Never know what may happen. A excellent poem.
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thank you..that’s how life is, you can only grow by taking chances and making mistakes… 🙂
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Pertinent questions! I never saw things like that before.
Good work!
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thank you..!
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Beautiful… !!! keep penning 🙂
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i would have hated me if i had met me….anyway quite a different view ; I liked it…
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i hate myself too…these are the questions i’ve asked myself and no was the only answer…
thanks for visiting and commenting… 🙂
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Nice poem….very different and expresses some of the most complex thoughts really beautifully.
Thanks for visiting my blog and appreciating my work 🙂
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Confusing it was when I read the Title! But when I read this, I feel amazed about everything! THe style, the rhyme! The words!
Beautiful poem!
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thank you… just wrote about myself there and it became a poem… 🙂
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That was really inspiring and thoughtful! You just made my friday. I want to be a little bit better today. 🙂
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glad that you liked it… 🙂
thanks for the likes and follow… 😉
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this made me want to go do my hair and put some makeup on! lol. 😉
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lol.. good for you.. now my poems are inspiring people to look after themselves well… 😉
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Your heart is the size of an ocean.
Go find yourself in its hidden depths.
-Rumi ❤
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thanks for this great thought…. 🙂
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If you like these types of thought..
then you might like every thought of Rumi.,
he’s magical 🙂
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ya i do read him… and i love his thoughts..
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hmmm..Beautiful and thought provoking
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thank you 🙂
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pretty nice.. ”If i met me, would i like me??” thoughtful…
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Think about it! I wrote this poem while searching for the answer. thank you for being here.
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Reblogged this on PSEUDOMONAZ and commented:
Because i don’t like myself today…!!!
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This is so me?!! You sound like a twin of mine. This is just an amazing piece of art.
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I’ve asked the same question to so many people here in wordpress. Its a great world, we find so many people feeling the same way as we do. But sad to know you are feeling this way. *hugs*
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*hugs* If this is the way you feel, I would really suggest you to go through my recent post, that is SO US. 🙂
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I just checked your blog..you’ve really started writing more. 🙂 I’ll be reading everything later at night, right now i don’t have much time. 😦
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No worries. Days are meant to work and nights are meant to enjoy but wait, when do we sleep? Say Hi to Insomnia B) xD
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Beautiful poem! Love the question it puts to me. Something to think about 🙂
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Thank you. I am glad that you liked it. 🙂
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That was awesome. And if you ask me, I never wanna be friends with someone like me. Once, a friend behaved to me like I do to her and I felt so bad that day.
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It happens to all of us. Isn’t it said that we must behave with people the way we want them to behave with us! Thanks for the appreciation.
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brilliancee!!! something that I always believe in and always keep reminding to myself!
Make urself interesting, Be how you want others to be! If you dont find urself interesting then nobody probably will.
keep writing! 🙂
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I know, we can make people like us only when we like ourselves. Thanks for the comment.
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this is amazing… i remb a serial statement in marathi.. jar tu mulga aslas tar tu tujhya sarkhi mulgi shi prem kela astas ka ? if u were a boy would u love a gal like you…
awesome lines gal u have written 🙂
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If i were a boy, i would definitely love a girl like me, hehe..I am sure about that.
Thank you for the comment.
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ya y not….
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nice Poem!!! you are amazing…..
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Thanks for the comment and for being here… 🙂 keep coming back..
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Hey ! Just came across your poem on Arindam’s blog…..I must say this is real beautiful ! And after reading it collectively with the Arindam’s part It feels much more beautiful 🙂 “Would you like you if you met you” This line is a master piece ! Very Beautiful !
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Thank you for being on my blog. Yes, Arindam did a nice job to give the poem a positive outlook. It felt much more beautiful along with his work.
Thanks again. 🙂
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This poem is so good 😮
This totally makes one think . Bravo.
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Thank you… 🙂 I wrote it years ago, read it again just because of your comment… 🙂
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