The day I first saw him,
I fell in love,
For the first time.
He was everything I ever wanted,
The man of my dreams,
We were engaged soon,
And in a month was our wedding.
We talked over phone sometimes,
As we weren’t allowed to meet,
The first time, he told me he loved me,
I could hear my own heartbeats.
Finally the day arrived,
The day I wore a red dress,
And he got down from a white horse,
Looking like a handsome prince,
He stretched his hand for me to hold,
And I did just that,
Among rituals, chants, blessings and more,
We vowed to be one till death.
With a heavy heart and tearful eyes,
I left my home for a new life…
The first day at my new home,
I already knew something was wrong,
Since the very day, I was treated like trash,
I was cursed as I didn’t bring enough cash.
The prince charming lost his charm,
The very day he bruised my arm,
Hurling abuses, he said he never wanted me,
All he wanted was more money.
I was sent back home, to fulfill their greed,
But there was nothing left with my parents to give.
Everyday I was told, I was a burden not a need,
With each moment I lost my desire to live.
I thought things would change with a budding life inside me,
I was proved wrong again, I was beaten up till it bleed.
Unconscious, I laid on the floor, all I could smell was kerosene,
I had no strength left to fight, and then the fire crept in.
I could see smiling faces behind those burning flames,
I smiled back at them, felt no pain, as I was going to a better place.
And all miseries came to an end, as my soul left that burning flesh!
Death is peaceful, easy.
It was life that was hard.
[One woman dies in India every hour in a dowry related case. Came across one such incident in today’s newspaper, it was pathetic. Is there an end to it? I’ve no answer. ]
It’s really pathetic to have such greedy assholes around us.
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Yes, it is.. felt so terrible after reading the news.. and i was shocked to see it happens every hour.. how cruel one could be??
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OMG!! It’s so horrible!
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terrible truth and you have written on a very touching and clear note..sensitively portrayed.
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its really terrible..read one news today and couldn’t help writing about it.
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Reblogged this on Second Chances and commented:
Much as I hate the very idea of this, I cannot pretend it never happens. I can only hope that talking about it helps people understand that this should never ever happen.
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seriously i am sick of reading about it almost everyday. I hope we can at least let people know that it can happen to anyone out there. If its not happening to us doesn’t mean it doesn’t exist.Thanks for the reblog.
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I have seen this happen sometime! It’s really painful! And you have just put up that pain in every flow of this poetry! Great one! 🙂
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not sometimes, it happens everyday… !
thanks..
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Every hour!?? i did not know it was so high. I just read a very good post about this – will send link as her blog is superb.http://bloodinkdiary.wordpress.com/ just trying to find her post – she has so many.
It is brutally tragic to say the least. Your poem is a testament..
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every hour it is, even i wasn’t aware of it till i read some news. I’ll surely check out her blog. Thanks.
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well, we have so many innocent brides being killed and what for??for money…???????Really pathetic situation….well expressed….
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it is pathetic.. money and greed are more valuable than people’s lives..
Thanks.. i had to write this after going through some disturbing facts!
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Hey, loved the way you have worded your thoughts about this uncanny issue. It’s disgusting to see how money and greed weigh more when compared to love in someone’s life. I belong to the North India and have come across many such instances. Thanks for providing such a wonderful read that has inspired me to write something about similar issues.
Take care.
Swikriti
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Hey there,thanks for sharing your views here. Glad that i could be a source of inspiration for you to write a post. Good luck!
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True and pathetic reality.
And what is even worse, it keeps on happening and happening until there is nothing else left to happen.
Already wrote much on it and will keep it until my last breath, but the problem is, “will it ever end?”
Not that we fear fighting but….thousands of innocent’s lives are uprooted and burnt to hell.
Why?
Do the beasts have an answer?
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I have the same questions.. haven’t found the answers yet!
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Let’s beleive that we will find them, one day, not too far…
Hope for a better future!
😀
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nice thoughts
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thanks!
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* speechless *
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thanks.. !
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its really pathetic. Our society is so brutal and we cant help.
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that’s the worst part about it.
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yaa i agree.
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Amazing way to spread awareness. :O Had no idea it was like this 😦
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Its a bitter reality of our society.. 😦
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You inspired me to also write about another one of society’s unfortunate problems. I hope you get to read it and let me know what you think.
http://beattheaudz.wordpress.com/2012/11/21/night-jobs/
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That is so impossibly sad D:
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It truly is.. 😦
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This one really hurt a raw nerve. 😦
And strangely, this is true – it is TRUE and is not a movie or a script – it happens even today,.. is happening right now, to hundreds of girls out there…
I don;t know when the change will come.. but someone has to bring it… someone.
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Waiting for that change to come..!
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I knew the statistics were bad – but every hour? My heart breaks for them …Well done for writing and sharing …
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Even i was shocked to see that..
Thanks for being here..
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😦
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😦 😦 😦
Dowry…..the social stigma….dowry death….my dear you potrayed this pain in such a vivid, snesitive and empathetic way. I have written a poem 2 poems on dowry titled “Dowry” and “Dowry death”. It is really a very, very sad and painful state of affairs.
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It is really sad.. i’ll shortly go through your poems, i am sure you would have done more justice to it.
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*speechless*
This is just.. so real.
I’ve seen this happen in every corner of India. So bad that I wish it goes away, I hope that one day exists in future at least. -_-
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I wish the same.. thanks for sharing your views.
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Reblogged this on The Inside Poison and commented:
This is so wow.
Some things do need a share.
People, please eradicate dowry and narrowness of your mind.
Please?
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Thanks for the reblog.. 🙂
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you have very sensitively portrayed a very burning social issue… keep writing.. Dowry has to be abhorred not by illiterates but literates like us in the first place
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I think the same.. its us who have to work towards abolishing these evil practices from the society.
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a tragic reality, a bitter truth. well expressed. 🙂 thumbs up
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thank you!
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The true India
A thousand dreams accomplished, a million challenges ahead…
We have a lot to clean up.
Great work!
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I agree with you, there’s a lot to be done. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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😥
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The sad reality of our nation.. 😦
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Wow. Indian society needs a desperate change and reversal of sexism. 😦
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Mona, this is the first time I read this post, and I can’t but appreciate the sensitivity and empathy with which you’ve portrayed the morbid reality of dowry harassment. I hope to see more voices being raised against the violent sexism that is rooted deep in the bone marrow of our subcontinent. I’ve wanted to write on such issues for quite some time, and I’ve always been afraid that I won’t be able to do justice. It’s time I draw some inspiration from you.
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