I check my phone a million times a day,
Hoping for your texts or a call,
I wait anxiously from dusk to dawn,
But there’s nothing, no sign of you,
Now that you are gone.
I relive old memories of us,
That rainy afternoon when we first met,
To the stolen kisses on that overcrowded bus,
Teary eyed I inhale the smell of your absence,
Now that you are gone.
I dream of you sometimes,
Far away in a distant land,
You walk away, leaving me alone.
I flounder to meet you even in my dreams,
Now that you are gone.
***
I wrote this poem in response to this week’s writing challenge in which we have to take inspiration from any of the 50 word stories that are been given there. I have written it in response to the story “Regret” by A lady in waiting:
“Gazing at the quaint street below, Nick watches couples come and go. Kids are playing with a soccer ball. He remembers the flea market open for the weekend in Long Island City. He lazily says “We should go.”
Nick turns toward the empty bed. He remembers now, that she’s gone.”
I wondered if you could read my thoughts 🙂
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haha… even you did that. 😛
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😀
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Brilliant Mona and so proud of u. Words weaved so beautiful that makes it an experience one can easily feel or relate to:)
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Thanks Vishal… 🙂
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Beautiful 🙂
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🙂
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😁😁😁
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Ye kya hai?
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There’s a thing called imagination… and i wrote this after reading that story… Aap toh peeche hi pad jate ho. :-Z
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Maine to kuch bola bhi nai aur ilzaam par ilzaam 😌😔
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Aap ka na bolna bhi bahout kuch bol jata hai.
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Free mein bad dua deti hai Dubai seedhe saade insaan ko
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Maine koi baddua nahi di… mai to sda aapka bhala chahti hun… 😛 Aapko meri bhalai bhalai nahi lagti toh mai kya krun? 😉
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I happened to stumble upon your blog, and this is exactly what I am feeling right now. It’s really comforting to know that someone else feels the same! thank you! cant wait to read more
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Thanks for being here and liking the post… 🙂
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I love the sense of emptiness and hope that go hand in hand in your work.
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thank you.. 🙂
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